Wednesday, 4 March 2015

Summer poem

Do you remember the time when  you smelt

the fresh leaves in the trees




Remember the time when it rained

and you ran outside and smelt

the damp road

that was summer.

Remember the smell

when your dad was cooking on the BBQ

and all the smoke.

went in your face that was summer.

Remember when you ran

on the boiling sand

that was summer.

Do you remember how you divide

in the cooled pool to escape hot sun

that was summer.


Do you remember the time when

you got the best

tann

that was summer.

Remember  sitting on the

whom sand

with a glass of water in your

hand

that was summer.

Do you remember sitting on the soft

grass looking at the blue blue sky

 that  was summer.


Remember when you jumped

in your bed and felt the cool breeze

that was summer.

Do you remember having a picnic

in the warm sun

that was summer.

Do you remember  smiling

the best flowers  

that was summer.


By Ryan





7 comments:

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