Monday, 2 November 2015

Hammer springs nightmares

Hammer springs nightmares  
27/10/15
The water was rushing down the spooky, dark, slide. Zachary went first, he zoomed into darkness weeeeeeeeeeeee. I waited for the light to go green, then just as I sat down I heard his voice “HELP I AM STUCK”, why o why did it have to happen on my turn I thought. It was like Zac was glob of banana stuck in the straw of a smoothie, that one frustrating and annoying glob that ruins your delux drink experience. I rushed to the closest lifeguard and told him what happened it took 5 minutes but the good news is he got out of the slide, but we went home with a very, very grumpy Zachary. 




             

3 comments:

  1. Hi Ryan I really like this writing, especially when you compare Zachary to a banana glob! Mum x

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  2. I really like this it's also very funny 😀

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  3. This is so funny I can see Zachary's face on the trip home, like an angry red storm.

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